Friday, 23 September 2016

End of term 3 blog post!

End of term 3 blog post!

Hi my fans I got some good news that I’m going no 2 week off school and the bad news is I’m not going to do post in the weekend because I have riverside camp and a rugby game on Saturday too. I'm so so sorry that I'm not going to do post but on Sunday I’m going to do some post in the weekend for you guys and my favorite post was the Olympic.Image result for crying face gifsSep 23, 2016 10:46:29 AM.jpg

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Lorenzo Writing - Narrative September 2016

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

Leone went on a trip to pt england beach they got to go kayaking but leone fall out of kayaking boat he saw a electric eels coming at him leone was swimming to get back to his boat he was lucky some of Leone friends helped him to get back to his boat.Leone saw his kayaking boat but the electric eels electric his boat so he can’t get away from them so his friend was slowing down Leone saw his face with water running down. Leone said i can do the kayaking but his friend said no can can do it but his friend slowing down and leone said can i do it now his friend said yes leone power his way to  the beach leone so fast that the electric eels can’t get him Leone got to the beach but his friends got catch but the eels was going to eat them all but leone came very fast like usain bolt. Leone make the eels fly in the air  and leone friends got away from eilv electric eels and they all make it to the beach and leone went to sleep and his friends too.

Friday, 2 September 2016

Lorenzo PES Olympics wheelbarrow race

WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.

I was walking to class and saw wheelbarrow in class I did not see a wheelbarrow in class. When I got to class I saw a wheelbarrow in the class that is strange?  When Mrs Baxindine our literacy teacher. During the race people were falling on the ground and laughing. But some people just kept going and and never gave up at all. loI got to the finish line 2nd. The race had finished But there were some really bad thing that had just happen. There were people who used wheels to cheat and win I felt so so angry and cross. I felt frustrated and disappointed and mad.That was a very challenging game and that was Frustrated world.