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Sunday 13 September 2015

Emily Wonderful Pie

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Emily Wonderful Pie
After you have read the story, you are going to write a retell of what happened, so we are summarizing in the correct order what happened.

Squishy squash and mincey to munch

Flakey bakey crispy to crunchy.

The pie was hy squash and mincey to munch

Emily was about to eat her wonderful pie that is make flakey bakey crispy to crunch on.

Some people came to eat emily pie but she said a little bite said emily and they talk  a big bite and ate the Squishy squash flakey bakey crispy to crunchy.

This big teacher came and said can i have a bite said the teacher and emily said just a little bite she the teacher ate a big bite and emily have a little bite of pie.

She look around and she saw a boy with a sugar and she said can i have a little bite.

1 comment:

  1. Hie it me seluone I like your pie because it has yum foot on it that is yum it is cool.

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