WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write a recount.
Sadly the holidays were over.Hi my name is lorenzo and we are Learning about hell to be a champions.we had to all goto the Immersion assembly On monday.
The theme is our term is we are the champions!!!!!!!! And i find out why we are the champions.
Today we are learn about olympics and we are looking at some drugs and virus at Rio and some of the olympics people don’t go because the drugs and virus.
I am looking forward for running
Hi Lorenzo
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing because it had some very good juicy words. I like how you talk about the drugs it was cool
But you need to re-read your story because there were some mistakes
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Awathan