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Friday 19 February 2016

Lorenzo Narrative writing and planning

Once upon a time they was Astronaut that was baeve. His name was Astronaut Ben everyone loved Astronaut Ben he said thank you all.One day Astronaut Ben have a mission to do outer space Ben was srceey that he wood not come back to new Zealand

Astronaut Ben was on the moon he had to look for the Super tip. The Super tip was lost 25 years ago. He went to look around and up down he cannot find Super tip.

Astronaut Ben saw a alien ship oaf alien Awathan  came out of the ship alien Awathan said do you need help has you saw a super tip ship yes it at mars but hell am i going dear come in my alien ship  and they land on mars and they find it.It was fast and full gas they came back with the super tip ship.

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