Wednesday, 21 September 2016

Lorenzo Writing - Narrative September 2016

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

Leone went on a trip to pt england beach they got to go kayaking but leone fall out of kayaking boat he saw a electric eels coming at him leone was swimming to get back to his boat he was lucky some of Leone friends helped him to get back to his boat.Leone saw his kayaking boat but the electric eels electric his boat so he can’t get away from them so his friend was slowing down Leone saw his face with water running down. Leone said i can do the kayaking but his friend said no can can do it but his friend slowing down and leone said can i do it now his friend said yes leone power his way to  the beach leone so fast that the electric eels can’t get him Leone got to the beach but his friends got catch but the eels was going to eat them all but leone came very fast like usain bolt. Leone make the eels fly in the air  and leone friends got away from eilv electric eels and they all make it to the beach and leone went to sleep and his friends too.

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